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(1) This Procedure outlines the components and requirements of a Higher Degree by Research (HDR) thesis. (2) HESF: Standard 4.2 Research Training; 7.2 Information for Prospective and Current Students. (3) ESOS Act: Part 3 Division 2; Part 5 Division 2. (4) This Procedure applies to domestic and international candidates and University staff administering this Procedure. (6) Higher Degrees by Research Policy (7) Victoria University (VU) offers a number of research degrees for which a thesis is the major component of assessment, as defined in the Australian Qualifications Framework (AQF). These include Master of Research Practice, Master of Research, Master of Applied Research degrees, the Doctor of Philosophy degree (PhD) and the PhD (Integrated). (8) The thesis may take the form of a standard written work, or may be submitted in an alternative thesis format. Alternative theses may include appropriate creative arts projects, or a thesis with publication that includes published and publishable papers with linking and framing material. (9) Regardless of the discipline and presentation format, the research undertaken and the depth of knowledge demonstrated in the thesis must satisfy the requirements for each degree as outlined in Part C – Broad Thesis Requirements by HDR Degree. (10) In addition to meeting the academic requirements of the degree, graduates are expected to acquire a range of generic skills and attributes. Whilst these attributes apply to all candidates, doctoral candidates are expected to acquire these skills at a more advanced level than Master Degree candidates. This expectation reflects the difference between Level 10 and Level 9 as outlined in the Australian Qualifications Framework (AQF). (11) The suite of Master of Research degrees are AQF Level 9 degrees with the objective of training the candidate in the application and critical evaluation of research methods and methodology through the conduct of a specified program of research under appropriate supervision. The thesis for the: (12) A Master of Applied Research, Masters by Research, Master of Research and Master of Research Practice degree is awarded after external examiners and the Chair of Examiners are satisfied that the candidate has demonstrated: (13) The Doctor of Philosophy (PhD and PhD (Integrated)) are both doctoral level at the AQF Level 10 degree which provides training and education in research under appropriate supervision, with the objective of producing researchers capable of conducting research independently at a high level of originality and quality. A doctoral candidate should uncover or create new knowledge by the discovery of new information, formulation of theories, development of new approaches, or the innovative re-interpretation of existing ideas, theories or approaches. (14) A PhD or PhD (Integrated) thesis is expected to equate to a sustained piece of written work and demonstrate the candidate’s ability to report research in a clear and succinct manner. Although there is no prescribed minimum length for a thesis as this will vary depending on the research topic and form of presentation, normally the thesis will be no less than 50,000 words and no more than 80,000 words in length. VU does not discriminate between the PhD or the PhD (Integrated) for the purposes of examination. (15) A Doctor of Philosophy degree is awarded after external examiners and the Chair of Examiners are satisfied that the PhD/PhD (Integrated) candidates have demonstrated: (16) A professional doctorate is a research degree at the AQF Level 10 that focuses on the issues and problems of a particular profession. (17) This degree has the objective of developing the candidate as a professional able to conduct research into their professional field at a high level of originality and quality. The professional doctorate provides education, training and development to assist candidates to uncover new information or insight within their professional area. (18) A professional doctorate thesis is expected to equate to a sustained piece of written work and should normally be no less than 50,000 words and no more than 80,000 words in length. (19) A professional doctorate is awarded after external examiners and the Chair of Examiners are satisfied that the candidate has demonstrated: (20) During the first year (EFT) of the PhD (Integrated), candidates are expected to submit a Year 1 Thesis (12000-15000 words) to an AQF Level 9 which will normally be assessed internally. Details about the Year 1 Thesis can be found in the coursework documentation. (22) Thesis titles are considered provisional until candidature has been confirmed. Where there has been a change of title from that which was approved at confirmation of candidature, candidates must report the change and the reasons for it on the Release of Thesis form at the time of submission. Minor amendments to the thesis title can be made at classification. (23) Thesis format at VU can fall into one of three categories: (24) The proposed thesis format is approved through the confirmation of candidature process. (25) A change from traditional thesis format to an alternative thesis format post-confirmation of candidature is only possible for the PhDs and PhD (Integrated) (AQF Level 10). (26) A change to thesis format post confirmation of candidature must be declared at the time of thesis submission on the Release of Thesis form. (27) Higher degree by research theses should be presented in a logical and concise manner. Victoria University specifies the following for research theses: (28) Victoria University requires the following mandatory and ordered elements for all research theses to be accepted for examination: (29) In this format the thesis comprises a substantial creative project and is presented in the format of one or more creative works in the candidate’s chosen medium/media (referred to as the Creative Component) and an accompanying critical reflective written piece (referred to as the Analytical Written Component or Exegesis). (30) These components are examined together as an integrated whole constituting the original and substantial contribution to knowledge required of research candidates. The balance between the Creative Component and the Analytical Written Component is negotiated at the outset of candidature between the supervisor and the candidate and approved by the relevant Associate Director, Research Institute(or nominee). (31) The thesis abstract in this format outlines the nature, scope and intent of the Creative Component. The abstract must provide a brief description that locates the Creative and Analytical Written Components within their relevant fields of theory and practice. It must also outline the proportionate balance between the respective Creative and Analytical Written Components, and their preferred ‘reading/viewing’ order. (32) Such submissions must equate to the standard requirement for the specific research degree of a sustained piece of written work and fulfil the designated degree requirements for thesis quality and contribution. (33) In all submissions, the written component must comprise no less than 30 per cent of the total work presented as the Thesis by Creative Project. This equates to 18,000-30,000 words for PhD theses and 12,000-20,000 words for Masters Research Degree theses. (34) The timing of the submission of the respective components of a Thesis by Creative Project is outlined in Higher Degrees by Research Procedure 9 Submission, Examination and Classification. (35) VU permits the presentation of a thesis with: (36) The initiation, key ideas, development and writing up of each of the scholarly publications and/or manuscripts submitted, or those ready for submission for scholarly publication, within the thesis must be the primary responsibility of the candidate. When any paper has multiple authors, the candidate must be the principal author of the work. Prospective authors can refer to the Universities Australia, NHMRC and the ARC’s Guide to Authorship, for clarity on the conditions of authorship. This must be supported by written verification from the co-authors, including their permission to incorporate the paper in the thesis submission. The research upon which the thesis and publications/manuscripts are based must not have been undertaken for another degree. (37) Scholarly publications included in the thesis must represent original research and must have been subject to academic peer review. The scholarly publications may be in the form of a journal article, monograph, book chapter, conference paper, or other format relevant to the candidate’s discipline. The scholarly publications included in a 'Thesis with Publications’ must not have been published more than 10 years before the date of the submission of the thesis for examination. (38) Manuscripts (as compared to publications) representing original research to be submitted for scholarly publication which are included in the thesis may be in any one of the following stages of development: (39) It is expected that the scholarly publications and the targeted outlets for the manuscripts to be submitted for publication are of high quality. This may be demonstrated via Scopus quartile rankings or, for example, via discipline-specific rankings or the scholarly reputations of the editors or publishers. Supervisors and candidates are reminded, however, that it is the academic standard of the overall thesis which is examined. (40) At the time of thesis submission, at least 50 per cent of the outputs included in the thesis must be scholarly publications or manuscripts accepted for scholarly publication after peer review. (41) Overall the material presented for examination must meet the requirements of an AQF Level 10 doctoral degree. The total number of papers and/or manuscripts will vary for each candidate, and will depend on the proportion of the overall thesis that is presented as scholarly publications and/or manuscripts. The supervisory team is the main source of appropriate advice to PhD candidates with respect to disciplinary norms in these matters, and on the integrity and equivalence of the proposed thesis submission to that presented in a standard thesis format. (42) Normally, the scholarly publications and/or manuscripts included in a 'Thesis with Publications’ are expected to have been developed during the period of candidature. Candidates may, however, be permitted to incorporate: (43) In such cases, the academic merit of the research and the suitability of the scholarly publications and/or manuscripts will be verified prior to enrolment through the University’s Advanced Candidature approval process (see Higher Degrees by Research Procedure 1 Admissions). (44) In all 'Thesis with Publications’ submissions the preparation of the framing and linking materials should be conducted whilst the candidate is enrolled in their doctoral degree. (45) Theses submitted in the ‘Thesis with Publications’ format must include an Abstract that includes a summary of the main findings presented in each of the scholarly publications and/or manuscripts. The Abstract should indicate how the scholarly publications and/or manuscripts are connected to a coherent conceptual framework, and how, when considered together, they demonstrate a significant new contribution to knowledge in the discipline or field at the doctoral level. (46) The scholarly publications and/or submitted manuscripts must be framed and linked with material to: (47) The submission for examination must include the following, in addition to the normal thesis presentation requirements:Higher Degrees by Research Procedure 8 Thesis Requirements
Section 1 - Summary
Section 2 - HESF/ASQA/ESOS Alignment
Section 3 - Scope
Section 4 - Definitions
Top of PageSection 5 - Policy/Regulation
Section 6 - Procedures
Part A - Summary of Roles and Responsibilities
Roles
Responsibilities
Graduate Research School
Provide appropriate advice and webpage links regarding thesis requirements to the candidate and supervisors.
Part B - Components of a Higher Degree by Research
Part C - Broad Thesis Requirements by HDR Degree
Master of Applied Research, Masters by Research, Master of Research and Master of Research Practice
Doctor of Philosophy and Doctor Philosophy (Integrated)
Professional Doctorates
Doctor of Philosophy (Integrated)
Year One Thesis
Part D - Detailed Thesis Requirements
Thesis Titles
Thesis Format
Basic Thesis Requirements
Presentation
Mandatory Elements
Master of Research Practice
25,000-50,000 words
Master of Research
25,000-50,000 words
Master of Applied Research
25,000-50,000 words
Masters by Research
30,000-60,000 words
Doctor of Philosophy
50,000-80,000 words
Doctor of Philosophy (Integrated)
50,000-80,000 words
Doctor of Business Administration
45,000-65,000 words
Doctor of Education
50,000-60,000 words
Thesis by Creative Project
Thesis with Publications – (Doctoral Level Only)